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MOTIVATION LETTER · INTERNATIONAL BACHELOR
荷兰本科申请动机信
A concise programme-fit letter for a Dutch international bachelor application
ApplicantChen Yutong
Student numberIBCOM-260418
ProgrammeInternational Bachelor Communication and Media
UniversityErasmus University Rotterdam
IntakeSeptember 2027 intake
Date22 August 2026
Academic profileHangzhou No. 14 High School, Chinese-English programme
Contactchen.yutong.sample@outlook.com
Argument rail
Why this disciplineHow public-interest information becomes a decision people can understand and act on
Why this programmeThe international classroom and active, self-directed learning model match my way of learning through evidence and discussion
What I bringA bilingual school recycling campaign tested with 46 student interviews
Addressed to the Admissions Board of Erasmus University Rotterdam
Dear Admissions Board,
I am Chen Yutong, applying for the International Bachelor Communication and Media for the September 2027 intake. I want to study communication because of one question: How public-interest information becomes a decision people can understand and act on.
My preparation began at Hangzhou No. 14 High School, Chinese-English programme, where I combined English-language coursework with social research and school media. In a bilingual school recycling campaign tested with 46 student interviews, I compared responses across three year groups and revised the message after the first version attracted attention but little action. The revised collection map and shorter instructions led to 128 additional bottle returns in the following month. This taught me to treat communication as a testable public tool rather than a decorative message.
I chose this programme at Erasmus University Rotterdam because the international classroom and active, self-directed learning model match my way of learning through evidence and discussion. I am drawn to learning with classmates who bring different cultural assumptions to the same communication problem. I also value a course that asks students to explain their choices, listen critically and connect theory with the world outside the classroom.
My cross-border preparation includes a six-week English-language youth media exchange with students from Finland and Indonesia. The experience did not make me an expert in intercultural communication; it made me more careful about checking whether the same message carries the same meaning for different audiences.
At university, I will keep a small research log, practise evidence-based campaign evaluation and join a student project on a social or environmental issue. In the longer term, I hope to work in public-interest communication in Asia, helping organisations explain complex issues without flattening cultural differences. This direction may develop as I learn more, but my immediate goal is clear: to become a careful communicator who can ask better questions, work with evidence and make space for different audiences.
Thank you for considering my application. I would welcome the opportunity to contribute a curious, collaborative and responsible perspective to the international classroom at Erasmus University Rotterdam.
Kind regards,
Chen Yutong
chen.yutong.sample@outlook.com · 22 August 2026
Fit evidence matrix
| Evaluation question | Evidence in this sample | Reader takeaway |
|---|---|---|
| Why communication and media? | Recycling participation project and revised bilingual message | Interest is tied to an observable problem and action. |
| Why this programme? | International classroom and active, self-directed learning model | Programme choice is specific and not interchangeable. |
| Why are you ready? | Interviews, comparison across year groups and a measured revision | Readiness is demonstrated through process, not adjectives. |
| What comes next? | Audience analysis, campaign evaluation and public-interest communication | Future direction is credible without promising a fixed outcome. |
ApplicantChen YutongEmailchen.yutong.sample@outlook.com
